Music lovers

You see this notice on an international English website for young people.

Write your article in about 100 words.

Sample answer

Music is extremely important to me and my life would be so dull without it. Listening to music is what I enjoy most!

I don't have one favourite type of music because I keep discovering new artists and musical styles. I've got thousands of songs on my iPod, so I enjoy anything from rock music that my parents listened to when they were teenagers to the latest pop bands. If I could afford to go so live concerts, I would go at every opportunity to hear new musicians perform. Instead, I watch music programmes on TV and I regularly search for new music on the i sterner.

Comment

The article is well-structured and the writer's opinion and likes/ dislikes are explicit. There is a variety of tenses and structures used correctly, including the second conditional. New vocabulary is introduced to avoid repetition and the answer is an appropriate length (107 words).